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Logo: Nana's Coffee Shoppe by Reptonic
I've never written a critique before so please bear with me here. I just put random scores on the side, just because I'm not too sure what to do with that, sorry if you no longer want a critique on this.

Okay, I want to start with saying that I do like this logo, but I feel the look of it is a little to harsh for a coffee shop. It's a little to edgy (literally), sharp, and drastic in the color differences I think. When making a logo for a coffee place, I feel that the colors used should mostly be warm and inviting as that is the vibe that most coffee shops do give off. The font does help with that though. It gives it a slight feel of milkshakes over the counter.
The thing in the circle really takes away from the logo. It makes it hard to concentrate on any other part of the logo, which ruins the whole, 'a logo needs to make you read it from left to right." It messes up the flow of the picture. This would be a much more fitting logo for an optical illusions shop or a magic shop. Something along those lines.

Though do take what I'm saying with a grain of salt please!

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Glubs
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Yooooo, I'm glubs, I like pretty girls and nonbinary people (Boys r gr8 2).
I'm 16 years old and I'm going into 11th grade this year (shout out to those AP classes that are gonna ruin my life lmao)

I like to sing and draw and write, while I've been told that I'm really good at all three I have failed to see anything super impressive yet.

I don't take down my old art (at least i try not to) so yeah if you wanna see some embarrassing and ugly shit just look through my dev man, make fun of it all you want, I know I do
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popme101 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks againBaguette Intensifies 
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popme101 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks Brah for the favKarma Tongue Icon 
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SqaceSatan Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015  Student General Artist
ur art keeps getting better and better :0
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dubiouslysmart Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015  Hobbyist
ty ty, i just draw like legit 24/7, a lot of it is traditional or wips so i dont get topost it all
yours does too tho!!
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SqaceSatan Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015  Student General Artist
aa thank you !
I draw all the time too I only post stuff I think is finished tho  
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SummerOxygen Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Student General Artist
thanks for the watch :)
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dubiouslysmart Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist
Oh no problem!
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yumeneb Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
thank you for watching me back!!!!
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dubiouslysmart Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist
no problem you cutiepatoot
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popme101 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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